the giant tortoise

This is the blog of Charisa, Pianist, Poet, Actress. Herein my poetry, tempests, exultations, tears and laughter are recorded upon glorious inspiration.

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She is red, vibrant, Pulsing to be seen, To be held and caressed. She is a petal releasing fragrance - Deep, scarlet scent; Will he notice? Will he be pleased? Oh agony! He breathes the air straight from her lungs. She is wilting - yet wills him deeper still, to uphold her crumbling strength. He is a god! A golden god. Her soul is bruised with his beauty.

Tuesday, June 29, 2004

"You write poetry too?"
I do write poetry. I do not tell him that it's very bad poetry. That what I write would never be published in my biography. That so much of it is birthed in the deepest part of my being, yet the words I have are cheap, common cliches. It is enough that I write poetry. It is enough that there are two of us in the room, who moments before didn't notice the other, but now have a random common link.
"Do you have any on you?"
"Not today. It's all memorized. Do you?"
"Actually, yeah, I was wondering if you would read some of mine. So I could get a strangers opinion." Out of the depths of a hidden pocket, he pulls two folded papers and gives them to me.
It is a brave thing to do. Because when the product of your soul is in the hands of another person, you will never feel more vulnerable. You can take any criticism, sure, and you appreciate it. But at the same time, you know they might not be honest. They might hate you for letting them read it. The worst thing they could do is laugh, or take something lightly that was written in all solemnity. People who do not write may appreciate, but do not understand the writer. Though we may treat ourselves lightly, within there is nothing more personal, more intensely a part of us than what we write.
I read his poems. I give them back, tell him honestly what I think, and leave.
When next we meet, we will smile, exchange a few words, and think, "There is another poet."

1 Comments:

Blogger caro said...

Wow, I understand. I used to write in private but finally got up the nerve to submit some of it in an application to get into a creative writing class. I'm glad I did because I got into the class and it truly changed the way I write. It was hard to give some of my stuff over to the class for criticism but it made me a better writer in the end. I have allowed some friends to read stuff and they appreciate it but can't give me the feedback that I need. It helps so much to have other writers look over your stuff because they understand.

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